What tips/advice would you give another photographer about shooting motion? Tips I would give to another photographer about shooting motion is too try and tell the model to do something while moving. An activity could be shooting a ball, running, or just jumping in the air. Keep on shooting until you get a result that you like.
Who are you critiquing?
Miles Williamson
Which image? Describe
Light Painting
What do you like most about the photo? Explain writing 3 sentences in the block to the right.
I like how defined his name is. It is very easy to read and is also very cool. I also like the color because it pops out but also isn’t too heavy.
What is one thing that could be better in the photo? Explain writing 3 sentences in the block to the right.
If he had turned off the light at the end it would have looked a lot better. Just the line going down at the end of the name makes it worse. It would have been a lot cleaner if the fingerlight was off at the end.
What one piece of advice for the photographer to help them make their work better next time? Explain writing 3 sentences in the block to the right.
I would have done a shorter exposure. It would have made it just that little bit more defined, giving it a crisper look. That would make it more pleasing to the eye and cooler to look at.